The story that you have created is amazingly imaginative.
-Decent game mechanics.
The only flaw that I saw was it could have gone more in depth, there could have been more playability. That, and there were some bugs here in there.
-The music would stop sometimes mid song, or skip. Sometimes it wouldn't play for long periods of time.
-Sometimes when you clicked in certain spots the game would freeze for a couple seconds.
Overall great job and I hope to see a new upcoming episode!
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